Fires Secret 04

You have a decent idea but you went wrong with the lighting. The lighting on it really basic. Feels like it just used the two lights and that was it. If you would have removed one light you would have gotten much more dramatic shadows.

Also you have shiny on the parts that really don't matter. The knee is the brightest spot second by the arm. If you were to point the lights more toward her face that would give you a better focus on her face instead of the knee. Also you should have oiled up her face as well so that it would get some reflectivity there.

To fix: Oil whole body including face.
Use one light for more dramatic lighting
Also push out her right elbow for a better sillouette